How to write email using English 4

Lesson 1

如何写地更真诚和礼貌

A. 发出请求
  1. 使用please。
  2. 使用问句形式,could or would you?
  3. 混合形式, could you please … ?
  4. 使用would, would you mind doing sth?
  5. 使用would like来代替want。
B. 发出第二个请求(一般来说一封邮件里最多两个请求)
  1. 使用also。例如: Please send me your resume. Could you also include three references? ` Could you meet me today at 3PM? I would also like the directions to your office.`
C. 在最后表示感谢

例如:Thank you Sincere thanks I appreciate it 或者更详细一点:Thank you for your + NOUN I appreciate your + NOUN Thank you for your time and effort

PS: 生词-Gerund-动名词

lesson 2

写道歉邮件

A. I am sorry if …

有时候一件事的责任是不清楚的(其实自己很可能并没有错)这时候适合用I am sorry if ... 例如: I am sorry if you didn't receive the resume I sent. I am sorry if I didn't understand the directions correctly.

B. I am sorry that …

这时候责任百分百在你,清楚地描述你的问题。 例如: I am sorry that the file was not sent. I have include the correct file in this email.

C. I am sorry about …

这种情况适合小的失误。印刷错误,拼写错误等。比如地址打错了: I am sorry about the confusion. I will send you a new document with the correct address shortly. I am sorry about the delay/inconvenience.

Resources

1. Using Softening Phrases to Make Polite Requests 2. Some exercise

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